7 Deadly Mistakes Businesses Make When Writing Business.

While it may seem like a straightforward process to an outsider, writing a business proposal is actually a very nuanced task with tons of different rules and requirements. If you want to experience success and increase the chances of your proposals getting accepted and read, then you need to avoid the following deadly mistakes that often set businesses back.


1. Not Doing Your Due Diligence

The biggest mistake you can make is not doing enough due diligence on the prospective client. Before sending any proposal – no matter how big or small – you should know the business like the back of your hand. You should be able to recite their mission statement, rattle off core values, name their clients and customers, and identify key decision makers.

The problem a lot of businesses have when writing a proposal is that they feel like it’s only important to understand which products or services the prospect sells. While this is certainly a component of understanding the prospective client, you need to dig much deeper. What are their work ethics? Which philosophies drive growth? What does the company depend on to meet year-end goals and objectives?

In order to understand all of this, you’re going to have to do more than run a couple of Google searches. You’ll need to do some investigative work and talk with current and former employees and clients. If you know anyone in the same industry as the prospect, speak with them, too. If you can’t talk about the company for more than three or four minutes straight, then you don’t know enough.


2. Writing a Lazy Executive Summary

Few components of a proposal are as important as the executive summary. Since many companies receive dozens of responses to RFPs – many exceeding 10 or 15 pages in length – they often rely on executive summaries to weed out the good proposals from the bad. If your executive summary is an afterthought, your proposal will essentially be an afterthought in the eyes of the recipient.

What does a bad executive summary look like, you may ask? Well, it’s long, dense, and vague. An effective summary is concise, digestible, and to-the-point. Don’t delay in getting to the main point: why you’re the right choice. This should be evident within the first couple of sentences.


3. Focusing on Price Over Value

While price is definitely an important component of a business proposal – it’s not the only component. If you’re spending too much time discussing dollars and cents, you’re obviously not spending enough time talking about value. News flash: the latter is more important than the former to most companies. Certainly mention price, but focus the majority of your proposal on value.

If you enter into discussions with the company, there will be time to flesh out pricing details. When trying to convince a company to work with you, though, value is what’s most important. How are you going to make them better? What do you do that no other competitor can do? Why are you right for the job? The answers to these questions are most important.


4. Making Grammatical Errors

Writing isn’t everyone’s strong suit, but unfortunately, it needs to be. In order to be looked upon with respect, you must be capable of stringing together coherent sentences without making grammatical errors.

According to Emphasis Training, a UK-based business-writing consultancy, careless mistakes tell prospects, “This person can’t write” or, “This person doesn’t care enough to check what they’ve written.” While it may not seem like a big deal, a proposal filled with typos is destined for the trash.

Never submit a proposal without having at least two other sets of eyes review it. Ideally, you should have a professional copywriter take a look, but this isn’t always possible. Just make sure the proposal’s writer isn’t the only one checking for errors.


5. Not Paying Attention to the Deadline

Deadline proposals exist for two primary reasons. First, businesses need to collect all proposals by a certain cutoff date in order to have time to sort through them and make a decision. Second, businesses use deadlines to weed out responsible vendors from irresponsible ones. After all, if you can’t meet a proposal deadline, who’s to say you’ll ever meet a project deadline?

In order to meet proposal deadlines, you need to avoid procrastinating. Start well in advance and keep the process moving. As the deadline approaches, anxiety and stress will set in – which seriously inhibits your ability to concentrate and produce. By knocking the proposal out well in advance, you don’t have to deal with these same problems.


6. Leaving Out Social Proof

Any proposal can make a claim. However, very few proposals have the factual information and data to back up these claims. If you want your proposal to stand out against the myriad of other competitors, then you must find a way to incorporate elements of social proof into it.

In order to avoid making your proposal’s copy too dense, include these items at the end. Attach things like spreadsheets, survey results, and referrals. The more factual proof you can provide, the more professional you’ll look.


7. Ignoring the RFP’s Requests

Companies send out RFPs for a reason. They want to receive highly targeted responses that satisfy their particular demands. They aren’t looking for generic proposals. Always review an RFP very carefully before responding. You should address each and every question/concern/issue they bring up. If they didn’t want to know something, they wouldn’t have mentioned it. Keep this in mind and be thorough with your responses.


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